storyboards

The new voice over

These are my woods.
Been mine for many years.
And my father's and grandfather's long before that.
The woods are mine.
Only mine.
I don't like outsiders, laughing and leaving (pause)
their rubbish.
If they enter, they're not leaving.

If there are any changes...they will be added straight away.
This is the one that Mike Buck (Emily's Dad) said and Dan had some variations to his so we will update once we hear the other one

Changes

We may change our thriller film opening shots to something different as it is freezing weather conditions and rave clothes aren't warm enough. Therefore to keep changing would take up too much time and, therefore, we would have to film over more days than usual.

We are going to have the four characters in a circle, they are smoking and playing with a dog. And one character is drawing a man hiding suspiciously in a bush. As the gunshot sounds and the characters run away, Emily throws her drawing onto the floor. The man who pulled the trigger will hide in the bush later on in the opening. He walks up to the sketch book, the camera is low down as we watch his feet as he stops at the book (worm's eye or low angle). He picks it up and we cut to the picture. He drops it onto the floor and we fade to the characters running away.

Voice Over

This is my woods.
They’ve been mine for many years and my father’s and grandfather’s long before that.
They belong to nobody but ME.
There ain’t no one gonna set a foot in here and get away with it.
>PICNIC<
Just you watch,
I’ll make sure of it.
>BANG<